I *really* like this - it's a fantastic way to break my BSG fanfic hiatus :D
I guess what I really like about it is how it took a left turn from the direction it looked to be taking. Like, stories about lovers teaching each other dancing is sweet, but it's not really all that individually character-based. You can transplant that kind of story formula onto pretty much any fandom and it'll be about the same.
But here, you made it a weird, incredibly interesting character moment between Sharon and Baltar - and, from a distance, without showing it, a really interesting character moment from Felix. Just, the interactions between Sharon and Baltar were really well-done.
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Date: 2008-04-08 03:27 am (UTC)I guess what I really like about it is how it took a left turn from the direction it looked to be taking. Like, stories about lovers teaching each other dancing is sweet, but it's not really all that individually character-based. You can transplant that kind of story formula onto pretty much any fandom and it'll be about the same.
But here, you made it a weird, incredibly interesting character moment between Sharon and Baltar - and, from a distance, without showing it, a really interesting character moment from Felix. Just, the interactions between Sharon and Baltar were really well-done.
Anyhow. I liked it. :)