It's a hard line to see when you're writing it yourself, I know. And on the surface, it was erotic, but then it twisted, and goodness. It was really a great sequence. Like, the sort of thing you'd love to see put to screen just to watch how it shifts.

:) I love comments too, when I get around to posting fics. (Or rather, get around to writing them) So yes. All kinds of love for this, look forward to more.